SHOW, DON’T TELL—use strong verbs and sensory details to paint a picture
(and avoid clichés)
EXAMPLE: I felt sick.
-My stomach gurgled
-My breathing turned raspy
-Every breath rattled in my chest
Try to come up with ways to SHOW the following information:
He was my closest friend.
She was surprised.
I was nervous.
The soup was delicious.
The sunset was beautiful.
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